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wrong service

by Anurag Rauth

Final Rating: 3.28. Finished #181 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Anurag Rauth

Experience

7 months

Time Taken

1 week

Description

a guy is try to get the right food for him

Comments

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Brianna

Next time perhaps have your camera move a bit less, it's a little jarring and motion-sickness-y

Adrian Winchell

Decent animation work, but the camera work and the concept of looking through the other voice's eyes is really distracting. Possibly because it's very simple large moves, it's not obvious at first that it's from a character's head. Some easing, and the smaller moves you'd expect someone to make while talking might fix that.

Lucas Donaldson

I like the idea of the camera as another character. that's cool. I also like the keyframing.

Jyreme Mcmillon

I think as is the face is distracting from the body 's acting which could probably also be pushed ....I do like the use of camera work

Robert Zhou

The camerawork is a bit too distracting. I like the zoom-ins for emphasis, but I feel a little dizzy when it zooms out. The character could use more varied facial expressions. Nice job though