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The Argument!
Ai submission.
Comments
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Alexander Shuaibu
You did good playing around with the camera
Just that... next time maybe make characters out of the voices
Your characters look like they should have squeaky alien-like voices
but AlltheSame, nice room and errything :D
Tafrey Mongkuo
The environment is excellent but the lighting makes it hard to see. The animation is shadowed by some hard to follow camera work. We want to see the work you put into this!
Lea
I counted 9 or 10 cuts here. A bit much for 11 seconds, and especially for something that isn't overly dramatic.
Lucas Donaldson
nice atmosphere and background. though could use some fine tuning of movements, to add an extra sense of realism.
Brianna
the acting choices were okay, as well as the actual animation. However the jerky camera movements were distracting. Just simplify the camera next time!
Vittorio
too much camera movements!
Adrian Winchell
Your camera work is a bit crazy in this. Dial it back a bit, and the shot at 288 needs its camera moved, it's on the wrong side of the 180 degree rule line. Work on your timing - there's a lot that's too severe/fast for the scene - especially the headshake at 195.
Moby
Colour of first character close to colour of wall behind. Not easy to read his head movements.
Good effort.
Joep de Laat
weird camera movement...