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No, No Meat!

by Kenneth Alexander

Final Rating: 2.94. Finished #203 out of 231 entries.

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Experience

A few years, part time.

Time Taken

20 days

Description

A meat vendor can't believe this man is a vegetarian.

Comments

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Eric Raffle

very poor acting and staging movement especially because of your character rig choice which looks more for realism motion, not enough body movement your characters reminded me a bit like dead stiff zombies, your lip-sync is way off and there are no jaw drops facial expressions of cheek movement when they speak, better luck next time and try posting your work on 11 second club forum to get some help next time.

Adrian Winchell

The server's very bobbly/poppy in here. Try to smooth him out. And at the end I really wonder where this is going next. D:

Sabrina Winkel

Good work. But I would have the character on the bench look at the other one more