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No Meat

by David M Daniels

Final Rating: 2.77. Finished #216 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

David M Daniels

Experience

About a year, give or take. Mostly in school.

Time Taken

About 30 hours, including creating the set.

Description

February, 2016 11SecondClub submission. Home made set, using two of the Eleven rigs.

Comments

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Adrian Winchell

Are these poses still linearly interpolated? Seems to be a very flat almost machine like quality to the tweening. Lipsync's off a bit - the rule I always heard was to have the jaw open quickly for the vowels then ease closed - in this case it seems the mouths are hitting their open pose well after the sound is already on its way. As for the body positions, I'd recommend trying to imply a little more weight to them, not just the gestures you're going for. There's precious little anticipation or follow through on anything here.

Lucas Donaldson

nice expression. What might need some work is the lip sync and pose to pose motion.