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No sausage
one harryed eyed comedian imitates the unspeakable conversation from "Everything is Illuminated". A dangerous diet in perilous times.
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Adrian Winchell
What IS wrong with him? It's a neat idea to have him talking to himself, but I'd love to see that accomplished through cutting, a la Gollum vs Smrgol, then cut out to have him sitting in a padded room. Rather than an abstract black and red stripe? I'm really at a loss for context here @_@
Ramsey Parks
I like the split personality idea, but maybe do something with the emotions to tell the difference between the two.
Richard Adams
Extremely floaty. Lacks fundamentals.
Sam Caudill
what's up with the eyes?
Lucas Donaldson
I like the idea of the same guy talking to himself. like he's got multiple personalities.
Tafrey Mongkuo
Love the concept but the execution needs work.