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What about the sausage!?
by Raj Maheru
Half way into my second year at University studying Animation.
Possibly a week for this version.
I entered this competition to work on my character animating skills. I'm not so good at it and am definitely looking to improve. This piece is far off from what I wanted it to be but I've learned a lot.
Comments
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James Hornby
some of the acting choices felt a little random. I wasn't super sure what was happening to the poor guy under the table
Adrian Winchell
It seems like he slides across the floor, rather than pushing himself across the floor. The camera moves are also a little distracting here. All in all tho', a little polish on eases and timing will really bring this up.
Sam Caudill
Great lip-sync but very floaty on the rest of the animation. Great posing of this character but you should have a few camera cuts to the other character when he's talking.
Sabrina Winkel
It looks good although I love his posture but the part when he slides back I would fix. Maybe just a shake of his head