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Meat is love, meat is life

by Francis Peysson

Final Rating: 4.26. Finished #96 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Francis Peysson

Experience

Young graduate

Time Taken

2 weeks, part time

Description

Two friends at a table.

Comments

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Evan Helford

I like the mood and the contrast between the two characters. Towards the end, the poses seem to be happening too quickly. The guy with the mustache, his pose at frames 247-252, it happens way too quickly. Also, I don't quite understand why the kid at frames 152 and 183, is looking away when he answers.

Richard Adams

Really good animation overall!

Adrian Winchell

The "no"s gestures don't really make a lot of sense to me - it's like he's looking at his shoes, rather than responding to the conversation? Overall, I think your poses are moving too quickly (or maybe just don't have enough ease/bounce). But there's no floating or twitching, so it's a pretty solid piece!

Lucas Donaldson

nice body and head movements