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Foraging for Malcolm

by Marita Bradley

Final Rating: 3.94. Finished #118 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Marita Bradley

Experience

I'm a student, so not too much.

Time Taken

16 hours

Description

How do you feed a vegetarian, anyways?

Comments

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Adrian Winchell

Needs a bit more pop on the gestures, they all float a bit.

Alice Reeve

Nice body language, but their movements are a bit floaty.

Yogesh Paradkar

Flot animation

Alan Yang

You could play around more with subtleties like tilts and rotations. As it stands, the animation reads kind of bland.

James Hornby

it works well, but you maybe could have been bolder with some of your poses, because at the minute it looks quite subdued

Clara Cornish

I think more variation in facial expressions would benefit this piece.