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Veggy Vermin
by Jon Nagl
Unfinished 2D animation, drawn directly onto Toon Boom Harmony. I'll finish it one day, but not this month...
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Annie Iglesias
I think if you had been able to finish, it would've been fantastic. I see that the goal was to pretty much make it look like they're sitting on a pile of trash and he's digging down for all these items. I love how it ends with the sausage being thrown at the protagonist
Brianna
Man some of this is so cute and well animated, I only wish it was more finished
Adrian Winchell
I'd love for the drawings to stay up a bit more, but this is well acted for 2D, all things considered! Noticed some of this is tied down/cleaned up and some is still rough - did you run out of time?
Richard Adams
The animation, what there is of it, looks really good, smooth and polished. Wish this was more finished.
Clara Cornish
Nice acting, it's funny! The only way of improving it I could think of is try performing the expressions in a mirror to really pin down what looks best.