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Wrong Order

by Alexandre Beaulieu

Final Rating: 4.84. Finished #69 out of 231 entries.

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Experience

Cégep Graduate

Time Taken

25h

Description

Two man at a restaurant.

Comments

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Hacho

I love the subtle movements in this, really great entry. focus on the eyes more!

James Hornby

your poses are subtle which is nice. But you could break them up a little with a little more overlap, currently you hit each pose and all the limbs stop at the same time

Lucas Donaldson

I like the little head bobs and other movements the characters do when they talk.

Naga Anim

nice try

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui

good

Léo Miche

Cool! The editing is exactly fitting with the rythme of the scene, that's funny! The staging is simple and works great. The key poses are cool too.
Maybe the overall is a bit stiff, you could add a bit of stretch&squash, animate the shoulders more, use a tiny bit of reversal in the back, polish a bit more the hands.
What could be funny as well is that the vegetarian could have a different pose each time we se him.
Anyway, great shot :)

Adrian Winchell

Vegetarian's first reaction is a bit too quick/sharp, but after that moves pretty well. Your carnivore could use a little more reaction to anything in the body, but overall this is fairly decent work.

swati bhardwaj

good timing and very expressive.

Robert Zhou

Nice! Your movements are very well done. In terms of acting, I think both characters could use more eyelid and eyebrow movements -- it looks like you didn't change them at all. Great job otherwise!