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A what getarian?
by Aerone Elpa
Description
My first 11 Second Club Entry
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
I'd really like to see his acting a bit stronger, if we're gonna see just him for the entire thing. Everything's solid, but - I can hardly see his lipsync on some words, and he just doesn't seem to be very interested in the scene.
Clara Cornish
Nice movements but maybe try pushing the facial expressions a bit (e.g his face would probably scrunch up a bit more as he tries to compute the lack of meat.) a nice start though. :)





