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A Bear's Banter
I have 3 years worth of experience.
2 and a half weeks
A Carnivore and an herbivore... What could possibly happen?
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Jason Klavir
YOCHHIMMM!
Noah Schneider
Grass design needs to be more clean, because from my personal opinion the grass design looks a little to sloppy!!!!
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
Very cool Michael! I'm very proud of you for entering in this months competition.
I would have like to have seen more acting choices from both bears. We see a lot of the brown bear, but not a lot of the panda. I would have also like to have seen more fingers on the bears...right now they have more of mitten hands then claw/bear hands.
Love the feet swinging. Background is a little too plain for me, i would have dulled the colors a little bit, (less saturation) to make your characters pop out a bit more.
Can't wait to see the other competitions that you plan on entering in. Keep it up!!
Alexander Shuaibu
Great way to finish it! love the end bit
Randi Munn Derakhshani
LOVED THIS... really good timing, animation is cute and snappy which show a maturity as an animator. characters are interesting and original. I just viewed 200 of these and your staging was a breath of fresh air. The one small critique I do have is the eyes of both bears. It could be a personal preference but the plain white eyes seems a bit stiff and might distract from the overall cuteness of the piece. Maybe a pupil dot... so they don't look like zombies :)
Richard Adams
Most glaring problem is poor lip-syncing. Neat concept, though.
Adrian Winchell
You've done a lot of 2D work here, with decent polish. I'd really work on your lines of action, as well as overlap and follow through - these characters are straight up and down for most of the scene, and when they're both visible their poses don't interrelate very much.