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Dad and Son Argument
this time i try to my best
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Adrian Winchell
Animation's alright, but your crossing the 180 degree rule line constantly, making the characters appear to just be swapping places rather than a proper cut to the other side.
Richard Adams
The constant shifting from camera to camera is distracting. Just use one camera, placed so you can see both faces at once.
David Meigh
Not a bad start. Research camera's and 'Crossing the line'. Here we cross the line. when the cut happens between the characters, we end up in the same place, causing a pop in the image with no clear direction on story telling.
If you favour a side of the screen, 1 character always looking screen right, and one looking screen left. Because they both look screen right, throughout the shot, the viewer will no clearly establish connection with performance.
Ramsey Parks
You switch between shots too many times. Almost makes me dizzy.
Lucas Donaldson
It's got some nice movements. though the kids eyes look rather vacant. unless that's what you're going for with some possessed guy turning vegetarian.