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Meat Talk

by Albert Coen

Final Rating: 6.28. Finished #20 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Albert Coen

Experience

6 months

Time Taken

2 weeks after work

Description

Two men are talking about meat.

Comments

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Evan Helford

The rendering and lighting look nice and the poses are clear. I would work on lip-sync (especially with the blonde haired kid). The "i don't eat meat," line, needs some work. Really connect the lips for "m" sounds and the teeth for "t" sounds, so the audience can really see what he's saying.

Jessica "Jess" Jerome

"I don't eat meat" lip sync needs a little more work.

Joaquin Casas

One of my favourite, but I prefer it without rendering.

Adrian Winchell

Good animation overall, wish you'd framed it a bit closer so we could see it more easily in 11SC's tiny resolution. Also you have an excruciatingly slow truck in for no apparent reason during the shot?

Aanal Kumar

too much of head movement... but awasom animation quality...

Davit Martirosyan

Nice concept)

Lucas Donaldson

Nice movements!