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Service Snobbery

by Steven Rawley

Final Rating: 4.86. Finished #65 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Steven Rawley

Experience

Junior College Animator

Time Taken

~70 hours

Description

A vegetarian has a hard time with a snobby waiter

Comments

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Joep de Laat

initially I'dd say the acting is good, but your camera does not always focus on where the acting is at. When someone puts emphasis on their words you'dd want the camera to see them.

Adrian Winchell

Decent work, though the vegetarian's gestures in the first shot don't read very well. I'd like to see a slightly more literal approach - a headshake for "don't" in "don't eat meat" there might help clear it up?