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Not What I Expected

by Joshua Kalinowski

Final Rating: 4.94. Finished #31 out of 136 entries.

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Experience

4 Years

Time Taken

1 1/2 weeks

Description

Julie sees something she didn't expect to see after the contractor called her in to see the progress in her new home.

Long Winter Rigs:
Julie
Paul

Comments

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Heather Richmond

The girl's "no glass" movement with the arms seem disconnected from the body.

Kelly Holmes

Good movement, my only issue is the hands seem kinda awkward

Yuri Marcel Vieira

I think that it would be good if the movement for "i took'em out" hit it a litlle bit before he said the line

Graciela Ariwijaya

I think the body movement was late in terms of timing.. like when the woman's gesturing towards the glass at frame 140-150, it'd be nicer if the hand is already there when she finished saying "glass". same thing for the guy at 230-240, I personally think it'd be better to move that forward to when he finished saying "out"

Sabrina Winkel

Best one I've seen so far! Unique and fun to watch! I love how she was really examining the window and the guy's acting especially when he points at the end like: hey girl! I love his wink

Anna

Decent animating, but the clipping on the gloves is rather distracting.