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Not the best business plan...

by TiffanyW

Final Rating: 3.49. Finished #108 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

TiffanyW

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Bonnie doubts her ability to work her new employer, Franklin, at the local jewelry store.

Comments

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Felipe Navarro

Good story, characters move too slow, and in some instances feels like they are floating.

Heather Richmond

The guy's elbows are twitching when he is leaning against the case.

Jean Lamy

Timing and body language needs work.