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Its a style choice

by Jeff Malanga

Final Rating: 3.11. Finished #122 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

Jeff Malanga

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Style can be practical. (First time submitting, looking to see if I'm moving in the right directions. All Feedback Greatly Appreciated!)

Comments

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Hajar Khakrand

what is wrong with their jaws?!

Felipe Navarro

Needs arcs.

Heather Richmond

Lip-sync is off.

Matheus

To remove those dots in the playblast, go into the viewport --> view and turn off pivots. That should do it.

Anyway, I think they're moving way too much, fast, and fidgety. I would tone down the movement a little, as they look unnatural. Looking at referencing would help a lot.

Keep up the great work!

Lea

I'd be interested in hearing where you got lipsync training from... it's all over the place dude. Nobody's jaw moves like that (unless they're chewing a rubbery steak maybe). I think it would serve you well to go back to animation basics before attempting acting.