Interview

Erin Goddard

I like the secondary actions such as the nervous arranging of pencils. It is not clear what they are talking about. Is she confused about glass in her own glasses? Make sure your story is clear and that the glasses don't go right through her head.

Sabrina Winkel

His fingers are a little distracting and when he's says: "they just kept getting dirty." He moves things around which I don't think is needed