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Only bottles and a straw
by Lelo Strzal
Description
Tired of cleaning glasses, this guy is only using a straw to drink.
Comments
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Jean Lamy
For you first animation, it's alright. Things you need to look in:
-Slow ins and slow outs, Walls, Timing, Posing appeal (Line of actions), Lip-sync. There's a lot more but focus on those for the next sound clip.
Heather Richmond
Arm movements looks disconnected from the body.