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No Glass
Description
Pretty straightforward - a girl goes to a guy's house for the first time, but he fails to impress her because he pours their wine into plastic cups.
Comments
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Felipe Navarro
Needs some work with your arcs, feels robotic
Heather Richmond
Movements look stiff.
Lea
Is the twist here that he's using, what, concrete containers, or?... it's not really that clear, since he IS pouring into what appears to be two glasses.
Graciela Ariwijaya
camera work looks sloppy... it looks rather shaky. The shoulder looks off around 180.. and I don't think what the guy's doing around frame 234 is suitable to the line
Sabrina Winkel
His arms are too distracting