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In for an Interview

by Vanessa Calogera Alessi

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished #105 out of 136 entries.

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Experience

Currently in second year of college

Time Taken

4 days

Description

Bonnie is talking to a guy, but his glasses have no frames.
I didn't give myself much time, with classes and all, so I just animated up until the end of the female voice. There is no animation after frame 250.

Comments

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Felipe Navarro

There's no animation past frame 218. It was good until that frame.

Heather Richmond

It looks unfinished. I'd like to see the guy character.

Adam Bucceri

incomplete. What's here is nice, but it can't be properly critiqued.

Erin Goddard

I like the direction this is going. I like her body expression at frame 130 (just a minute) it feels very believable. Your poses feel a little bit start and stop, some movements could use a bit more fluidity and it's too bad that you didn't quite finish the end of it. Keep it up! :)

al.maitov

it seems that zooming a little bit closer would be more comfortable to the eyes. its just, imho.

Sarah

Was pretty good till the freeze frame at the end, nice gestures and expressions, her body seems a little stiff when she moves though.

Graciela Ariwijaya

I think it'd be better to show the male character too. And it shouldn't look like a freeze frame from frame 255 onwards... the background is also too empty, and looks a little bit off, as the chair is positioned at the corner of the room. But a good try to do in 3D