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Secret of Telescope
The girl tries to look through a telescope and finds that there is no glass in it. She wonders why the guy did so and asks for a reason.
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Jean Lamy
You spent too much time at the beginning, this was about 25 secs and if you had taken out the first couple seconds, jumped right into an establishing shot, and then the dialogue, you would've have more time.
The acting, timing, and weight is lacking in this piece.
Felipe Navarro
You completely lost me at the beginning, the woman does a weird move at the beginning.
Heather Richmond
Characters' lunge movements are too much in the beginning.
Sujit Karmakar
Animation before audio not needed. Need to concentrate in audio part only. So that you can utilize your time properly.
Hari Krishna Gunda
nice
Gaurav Rawat
good work
Navdeep Singh Sran
Looks great !
Pavan Sri
really nice,lip sync came good..keep it up
Sandeep Chauhan
nice execution
Erin Goddard
Try simplifying the story at the beginning. There is too much happening before the dialogue even starts, you can save yourself a lot of time by just sticking to the 11 second sound clip.
Jenon Tuladhar
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Sabrina Winkel
At the end the boy moves his body too fast
Amit Gupta
Nice job , I like the animation, nice lipsiing and and animation flow