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Don’t have to clean them anymore
by Laure Drevet
Description
In a restaurant, a waiter is called out...
pbm with ncloth
Comments
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Heather Richmond
The guy character's walk needs y-translation (up and down) movements.
Erin Goddard
Not a bad start, movements feel a bit floaty and it doesn't really make sense for the guy to have his back to the camera at the beginning. Other than that his movements seem quite natural they just need a bit of polish.





