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Don’t have to clean them anymore

by Laure Drevet

Final Rating: 3.99. Finished #80 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

Laure Drevet

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

15 days

Description

In a restaurant, a waiter is called out...
pbm with ncloth

Comments

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Heather Richmond

The guy character's walk needs y-translation (up and down) movements.

Erin Goddard

Not a bad start, movements feel a bit floaty and it doesn't really make sense for the guy to have his back to the camera at the beginning. Other than that his movements seem quite natural they just need a bit of polish.