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No Glass?

by Mickayla Miller

Final Rating: 3.94. Finished #82 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

Mickayla Miller

Experience

3 Years

Time Taken

54 hours-ish

Description

The clip was animated in maya 2015. I had a lot of fun doing this and it really helped me understand how to make my work flow more efficient.

Comments

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Felipe Navarro

Movements are too slow

Calvin

i would have had him put his hands through the frame also.

Heather Richmond

Characters are sliding too much.

Erin Goddard

The woman's forearms are stretched way out of proportion in the last frame which looks really strange. Movements feel a bit floaty. Try holding a pose every now and then. Keep at it!

Sarah

The general general body language is good, especially the finger wiggle showing where there's no glass, but the arms are very rigid, and the elbows are at weird angles for most of the animation. Almost there!