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Nominal

by Melanie

Final Rating: 4.52. Finished #52 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Melanie

Experience

Will graduate at the end of summer.

Time Taken

Three weeks

Description

Student submission.

Comments

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Dieguito Pritchett

Really floaty movement and lacks the element of facial expressions. Keep pushing more for exaggeration and appeal :)

James Cavanaugh

Nice keys and acting choices! The way that it was inbetweened makes it feel floaty though. Get into the graph editor and work with your splining a bit, it seems like a lot of the animation didn't go through the full polish stage. It's a huge headache, but getting your spacing and arcs fine tuned will push this animation very far!

Santiago Escobar Mojica

To mechanic. Maybe if you work more your in your golden poses,could you incremet the lvl of this animation

Ryan Hill

Nice animation. Please watch the placement of the orange guy's feet, and how he balances himself in these poses.

Jereline Vasquez

Good! only thing I'd say is you should ease in more when the character at the desk furrows his eyebrows.