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Description
Two people look at a mysterious room.
Comments
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Dieguito Pritchett
Too stiff and stagnant. Make the characters move a little, tell us who they are, how they feel, whats going on.... Keep pushing :)
Jereline Vasquez
Character in the blue shirt is pretty stiff compared to the other.