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Wrong Wire
Description
The pounding will be the least of his worries
Comments
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Dieguito Pritchett
Reference Reference Reference... Record yourself or someone else acting the dialog out first and see how the body moves. It will help with believability. Then push for exaggeration
Anais Larocque
This looks more like an elaborate blocking, I guess you didn't have enough time ! :) Also, why did you a huge box infront of your character ? That looks a little confusing.
Howard Cameron
It's hard to see what the other character on screen right is supposed to be doing.
Sarah Johnson
The main character's movements are very on-the-nose and a bit over-acted