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The plane

by ZAK

Final Rating: 2.90. Finished #88 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

ZAK

Experience

6 months

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Two guys talking on a plane

Comments

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Taylor Cole

Lip sync was off and the guy with the book had very stiff acting. Also, I've seen two other animations with this same exact premise. Had a few good facial expressions though

Ryan Hill

Main character's acting doesn't match/flow well between cuts. Try adding an extra kick in the seat at the beginning to address his reason for asking his partner what's wrong.