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D&D Situation
The barbarian general is checking in on his underlings in the dungeon...
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William Barry Eggington
Enjoyed seeing this one progress in the forum. Good work.
Dieguito Pritchett
Good job! Maybe add a finger tap on his chin in the area of 207?? :)
Samuel Bourland
I like the expressions. Try adding more wide and narrow in the mouth shapes
Ryan Hill
Great 3D animation and camera placement. The characters weight and balance can use some polish around the ending when they turn to look at each other. Also, the grey character's body and head placement doesn't appear to directly look enough at the two new characters. Good job!
Samuel Couffe
I really love your poses, you've got good arcs and I really like your spacing, but I would maybe precise the labial more with a bit more exaggeration, specially with the "o" and the "a" sounds. But I really liked your shot ! Keep going animating :)