Snack

Marten Visser

With the last words there is too much movement in my opinion. I like the guy in the chair.

Ren Wilkey

Bahahah extra points for the idea!

Fatemeh suori

Very good

Cristy L. Einung

Tom's arm gestures don't look natural, they are too literal to every word he says. Try acting out the scene to figure out what the body naturally does when speaking. Good luck!