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Miscalculation
by Chad Cox
A young scientist is brought back to reality by his mentor.
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William Barry Eggington
I remember this one from the forum. I can see the refinements you have made. Well done.
Dieguito Pritchett
Beautiful background! The character in the back walking feels a bit too stiff, but the guy at the computer has me fully convinced he's alive! Great job. Just be careful and keep an eye out for unintentional cross-eyed characters. Computer guy goes cross-eyed starting at 213
R Dale Harper
The taking off of the glasses was really great. Really great.
Christopher Scott
Watch the knees and the weight shifts. The hips reaction to the weight transfer isn't reading.
The sitting guy's head shake could be smoothed.
Marten Visser
Cool acting choices. Nothing is overdone.
Samuel Bourland
Acting is great. Could use work on the walking and body mechanics.
Marckus Duverger
Very well done, especially the guy on the laptop. Really natural looking movements, pushed well too though
Ritvik
rendering doesnt cover up bad animation /story
Mahammadul Karim
awesome, just need some improvement in walk ....
Sascha Vernik
I love how you cut off the ending. You can feel how the sitting guy's attention is torn between his screen and listening to the other guy talk. Impressive!
Thibaut Huet
really great !