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Clean Up Crew
by Piers Issler
Second animation collage class
A week / three or for days cumulatively
Doing dirty work can some times put you on edge.
By Piers Issler
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Paraskevi Koutalou
I was confused with the last cut. Until then I thought the character was sitting on a sofa or something of the sort, didn't perceive it as background horizon so it popped out kind of irrelevant to me, the last scene. Good smooth animation, though I think some more stress or pause would work great at some point, to break the homogeneous movement
Elisabeth Janerka
Crazy twist!
Better framing - I couldnt tell where the two characters were in relation to each other - physical spacewise. I get that you dont want to spoil the end but some sort of establishing shot with of them in the same shot would be nice