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The office

by Dulce

Final Rating: 2.75. Finished #245 out of 314 entries.

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Animator

Dulce

Experience

2 moths

Time Taken

A week

Description

A normal day in the office

Comments

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Lauren Kimball

Needs more movement. Also look into some fundamentals on staging your camera -- particularly the 180 rule.

Elisabeth Janerka

Super confusing framing, can’t tell the two characters a part at all, and the amount of cuts could be fewer too