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Annoyed by humming
by Screech_KN
Description
first 11second club entry.
it is about a guy being annoyed by his friend because he is been humming for a whole day.
Comments
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Fred
The cog of the guy in the back should move a little when idle. Even if it's just a few pixels.
Ramon Arango
I think your acting choices are quite good but the animation needs to improve a lot. There are almost no weight shifts on the front guys hips for example, the lipsync could do with a bit more, like bigger, clearer mouth shapes for the big sounds, overall expressions need pushing as well. At 66 for example I can't really feel the Oh shape from SONG and a flash of crazy eyes.





