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Annoyed by humming

by Screech_KN

Final Rating: 5.42. Finished #83 out of 314 entries.

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Animator

Screech_KN

Experience

around 5 months

Time Taken

7 days

Description

first 11second club entry.
it is about a guy being annoyed by his friend because he is been humming for a whole day.

Comments

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Fred

The cog of the guy in the back should move a little when idle. Even if it's just a few pixels.

Ramon Arango

I think your acting choices are quite good but the animation needs to improve a lot. There are almost no weight shifts on the front guys hips for example, the lipsync could do with a bit more, like bigger, clearer mouth shapes for the big sounds, overall expressions need pushing as well. At 66 for example I can't really feel the Oh shape from SONG and a flash of crazy eyes.