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Final Rating: 2.70. Finished #250 out of 314 entries.

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Experience

3 weeks

Time Taken

2 days

Description

Two guys talking when the humming of one makes angry the other guy. (I reload my animation because i put my name accidentaly before i read the rules).

Comments

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Nat Black

it would be nice if arms didnt obscure the faces midtalk. compositions feel slightly uncomfortable due to cutting off of the characters. I'd also put them closer to each other. general acting has a nice direction however, it flows nicely at this stage. I also like that wink at the end.