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focus focus tralala
by tri wibowo
Description
a story between freelance animator and his annoying cat.
Comments
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Ruudy HermiOne
Good job !!!!
Collin Turner
The "I know you can" moment feels appropriate tonally. The animation smoothness is respectable. The first shot composition does not communicate the story as well as it could. The attitude of the characters throughout the animation feels goods. Some of the body mechanics do not respect the weight of the characters as well as it could. Very good animation.





