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Supermarket problem
by Daniel Puga
Description
Two guys hanging out in the supermarket, but one of them is not having his best day, and the other is going to notice that.
Comments
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Jamie F
Be careful of the 180 rule
Lauren Kimball
Camera angles are jarring -- do more with less, and also make sure to respect the 180 rule.
Paraskevi Koutalou
good, though i find the switch a bit confusing
Elisabeth Janerka
Nice setup but you should always try to keep the characters on the same side of the screen to avoid confusion. Try looking up the 180 rule in camera work
Danette
Weird cuts, layout is strange.