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I can show you the body

by Ashleigh Hwang

Final Rating: 2.90. Finished #143 out of 168 entries.

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Animator

Ashleigh Hwang

Experience

second year

Time Taken

we had 4 weeks

Description

uni project

Comments

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Ceasar Villegas

Too much negative space on screen left, tighten the camera up on character. Better silhouettes as the hand over the face. Super important to move the core as the character looks flat and unconvincing.