First try Work in progress

Name: First try Work in progress
Duration: 12 s
Channel: Kailen Dean
Description: I wanted to try out this month's challenge in between classes. I think I was trying to rush to the cleanup phase too quickly. I have already taken a step back to focus on body mechanics first before I clean up. Constructive feedback is welcomed.

by Kailen Dean

Final Rating: 3.53. Finished #105 out of 168 entries.

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Animator

Kailen Dean

Experience

Second Year

Time Taken

I need to be more efficient because it took me about 20 hours so far.

Description

I wanted to try out this month's challenge in between classes. I think I was trying to rush to the cleanup phase too quickly. I have already taken a step back to focus on body mechanics first before I clean up. Constructive feedback is welcomed.

Comments

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Nicolas Briellmann

nice! a shame that it's unfinished.

Christina

I would've loved to see this one finished!

Jacob Webster

I wish this was finished

Richard Adams

This one's hard to rate. What you have here, what there is of it, is really good. Problem is it all looks so unfinished. Like you couldn't finish by deadline. Excellent staging, appealing character design, solid three-dimensional form, what lip syncing there is looks terrific. Just unfinished. Would've given this an 8 or 9 if finished.

Fabian

feels a little too unfinished, but what you have made looks very good.