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The Body

by Jonathan Clark

Final Rating: 2.39. Finished #161 out of 168 entries.

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Animator

Jonathan Clark

Experience

Only one semester of experience.

Time Taken

A total of 37 hours

Description

This was my first animation competition and I learned a lot. Even if I don't place, I am proud of the work I did and the progress I have made as an animator. This was a lot of fun and I plan on doing more of these competitions.

Comments

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Ceasar Villegas

Very little anticipation, core looks locked up and then floats, mouth isn't synced and just very mouthy.

Christina

some of the movements are weird, like when he turns his body to point but keeps his head in the exact same posision.

Marckus Duverger

There’s a lot here that you can improve on, like the characters spine is barely moving. Hips & the spine are used in a majority of actions. He needs more posing & powerful ones. Even your better poses can be stronger, gotta use the hips & spine.

Michael

a good first pass...