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Explicit Lyrics?
by [deleted user]
[deleted user]
some
3 weeks
A travelling band can't determine the cause of being rejected by some venues. Could the lyrical content of their songs have something to do with it?
Comments
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Cody Cessna
Great choice of characters for the voices. Subtle, plausible, interesting storyline in your interpretation.
Inacio
nice use of props and background
Alyssa FitzGerald
The drummer's animations are good, but you could work one the spinning stick hand more so that it's extra apparent that it's not just apparating around.
The girl's glitchy with her hair when she's turning back towards the camera.
The bassist's posing in the middle also could be improved upon.
Spencer Bentley
I like how much is going on, from the drumstick moving, to each character subtly moving during other's dialogue. A little more refinement would make this great, but for now it's just really good.