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flowers
by Olgyay Anna
I'm a graphic and animator student in Hungary. This is my fourth semester.
It took me about a couple of days.
Two flowers are chatting.
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Alyssa FitzGerald
Even if it's just a straight line I'd put a mouth on the right most flower at the beginning because it has me anticipate the mouth being on the petals when it ends up being on the stem.
While the colors and style are pretty it's also very clear this is in the blocking stage. Add more inbetweens and when you do, try to focus on s-curves and using the wave principle especially with the leaves. Also drag and follow through will help on the petals.
Darren Evander
unique look but animation isnt believable,try to decrease the key poses and dont move too much,because it is distracting