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Is It Me?
by Liam Booth
During a bank heist, the teller refuses to give the money. The robber gets self conscious, asking if it was something she said.
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Richard Felix B. Candia
I love the idea great job.
Véronique Marazzi
haha really funny idea!
Raul Soria
Needs some improvement on movement timing. A little more work on 12 principles.
Inacio
It looks like a cartoon series. I like it!!
Alyssa FitzGerald
The animation is jittery but it's clear you have enough knowledge of comedic timing that the key poses are working. Stop having the eyes play ping pong and lose their volume. The hair movement is also overdone and inconsistent. The design for the girl at the end also covers up her eyebrows, either remove the bangs or find a method that lets the audience track them underneath easier.
Ben Zingo
started strong with the head roll and gun wave, but then characters started feeling very stiff.
It seems like you spend a lot of time on the drawing & coloring, and maybe ran out of time for more dynamic animation
Spencer Bentley
Funny concept with good environmental setup, but the lip syncing needs a bit of improvement.