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the f word
a little girl is talking with one man
Comments
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Cody Cessna
The composition feels flat. Try playing around with your space.
Catalina Montelongo
the placement/size of the characters was a little confusing to me but I liked the animation!
Bartu SARIPINARLI
Good facial gestures in the girl.
Even though covering the mouth could be a good solution when you are on a time budget, it should be done in a more natural way. It shouldn't be obvious that the mouth is being covered in order to dodge the lip syncing work.
Inacio
The quality is excellent, and so is the animation. the hiding his mouth was a turn off for me but very good
Alyssa FitzGerald
Scale is all wrong due to the different proportions of the rigs.
Spencer Bentley
The animation is ok, refinement would help, but I can't get over the fact that she's just a scaled-up girl model.