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Runaway Pup
by Tyla Bryant
I am a 3rd year undergraduate animator.
I spent around 9 days on this.
Looks like Kayla's puppy has some issues with swearing...
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Alyssa FitzGerald
The scale of the characters feels inconsistent. Her body proportions are that of a child's while his are that of an adults and yet sitting on a bench together they're almost the same height. While in the previous shots he feels much bigger.
The hand fidgets on the female character need to be refined more.
The rigg's being pushed too far with the shoulders on the word "Wrong". It looks glitchy because of it, you can tone it down and it still works with the personality you established in the previous shots. The way he sits down is also awkward. Maybe film some reference of yourself to see what leads and what follows when sitting down.
Inacio
good poses and movement from both characters