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A Conversation
by ajax
I am a student of YHS who is in a second year of 3d arts
The whole month
Just a average conversation to her self talking to good and evil to see if her question is good or bad, is it bad or good?
Comments
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Darren Evander
camera movement is misleading
Sheetal
Lighting of the environment is low, not able to see the expressions and too much camera movement.
Catalina Montelongo
I feel like the camera angles/movement distracted a little from your animation
Richard Felix B. Candia
too much camera movement is quite distracting. You could really improve if you make the composition a lot better too.
Inacio
it is too dark to know what she is saying, and the camera is moving, as well as the last character is stiff and unclear
Alyssa FitzGerald
The camera work is distracting.
Aniela Bogusz
A more fixed and smooth camera would help
Trevor Finney
Seems like your animation is on the right track but the camera movement is very distracting. Try framing your shots with a static camera.