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The F-word
by Mary beall
1st time animating an rigging for a computation so I'm looking forward to the fun for learning an getting feed back on how everything looks. Going through 3-4 edits to come up with this lovely pieces.
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Alyssa FitzGerald
The torsos are stiff and the leg is crashing into the geometry. The actions are also both floaty and too quick with no build up.
Ben Zingo
Try acting out the scene and shooting reference to help with posing & timing, and don't forget to bend the chest, neck, etc. to help add a bit of life to the characters!
Blinking also helps, and try adding a little rotation on the other axis, to add a bit of tilt & organic-ness!
Aniela Bogusz
Looks real nice though the movement feels too robot like.