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Worry
by Keryth
A conversation on a park bench reassures a stressed friend. First time doing a project this big, hope you enjoy it!
Comments
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Catalina Montelongo
Love the life of the characters! Good follow through
Richard Felix B. Candia
I feel like she reacted too early but it is well animated.
Bartu SARIPINARLI
Good acting choices overall. As an acting advice; you can make those acting choices a bit bigger to increase readability. For example the girls eye in the frame 100-115 makes me feel that she is shy about it, so it should be seen by everyone. Or the shoulders going down around the frame 130 which is a great acting choice but should be seen more clearly by the audience.
Gabrielle Nonnenmacher
Very good base on body mechanic, I would recommend a little more attention on the overlap.
Raul Soria
Characters move slightly odd, but you are almost their.
Laurence
Why is she smiling at the end?
Inacio
nice lipsync and great poses
Alyssa FitzGerald
The female character's lip corners being so wide apart makes her look unnatural. You also need to focus more on blend shapes with lip syncing. His shift is good, her squirming is twitch in a bad way. You also lock her elbow at one point and it creates a pop.
Spencer Bentley
Decent animation, although I wish there was more going on as a whole. They also seem stiff, despite the fact they're constantly moving, it's hard to describe.
Ben Zingo
the posing and some of the timing feel very natural, but then some bits of animation feel very jerky & choppy.