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Weird Conversation
by Oiegar Timea
I'm a beginner.
It took four days to create this animation.
In my animation, the protagonist is two average pencils that form a dialogue with each other about the little girl. I hope you will like it!
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david
props for being creative! good stuff!
Paraskevi Koutalou
Interesting approach!
Alyssa FitzGerald
There doesn't seem to be enough in-betweens to smooth out motion. The wide shot has a good amount perspective, though the dresser looks off. The legs on the close shot seem lumpy, even though they are mostly used as background which does detract from the scene.
It's clear you spent a large amount of time working on the lip movements, but it's hard to notice with how jerky the base movement is.
Spencer Bentley
This is an interesting direction to take, very strange. Not bad, a bit choppy, but not bad.